EfN Audition Page 1

OH GOD. IT IS FINISHED. *begins uploading like mad*

Right, page one of my audition for . It will be a miracle if I get in considering all the amazing talent in there (have you SEEN some of those people's auditions? MY GOD.) but I may as well try, right?

This comic and the three pages that follow it took me around 30 hours to do all together. This is probably because my coloring style is such a bitch... and yet in spite of all that it still manages to look unprofessional, ugh. I basically did it from background to the characters so that way I wouldn't get lazy with the backgrounds... it did actually pay off, I think this is the best work I've done backgrounds-wise. And comics-wise. And original character-wise.

Okay, overall for me this is a step above my usual fail, so I guess that's good, right? XD This is the first time I've tried to make an original character and make a comic with him, so I guess for my first shot this isn't too bad. Hopefully with practice I'll get better at making things look less messy.

...hear that judges? I can do better, please don't just dump me on account of my messy fail! ;__;

Things I like about this page: The background coloring, Rugby (oh God why is he so cute?), the sound effects.

Things I don't like: The inking, the KJKJSF LINES on the damn paneling, the actual lineart for the background, every picture of Wax... ugh.

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Wax and Rugby are mine kthx.